I'm playing on Xbox One and cannot confirm your list. I know I've done all those mistakes but no achievement.
Also, I know of at least one more mistake, that I am sure of:
When talking to that fruit/vegetable saleswoman (right at the beginning), you can accuse of her lying and accuse her of murder. These count as mistakes, because on my second playthrough I got the medium donkey achievement after this conversation!
And:
Can anybody explain to me how to get the Dragon's Smoke achievement exactly? I'm on my third playthrough now and cannot seem to trigger the right thing in the conversation with Thora Grey. It is while you speak to her in the mansion, after she has been kissed by Franklin Clarke, right? I would be thankful, if anybody could explain this to me in detail.